Moodboad

 

story bored

 

codes and conventions

 this is a documentary on underage drinking and my documentary follows codes and conventions because it uses experts to give an opinion  a simple opening with interviews with underage people and there story about drinking 

a professional documentary 

this is my documentary 

my documentary features interviews with experts and interviews with someone who has experience in the subject in a simple format it fits the format of a documentary because it is serous and dose not need complex shots to tell the story and present the theme 

final edit

evaluation

with my feedback and looking at my film I would improve it by having more older people discus the topic and record scenes in more interesting background I thought having a consisitnet background to the interviews to make it look more professional and would make the b-roll more intresting by showing inside of pubs people drinking and the effects it has on them I would of gone into the effects over years and interview people of different backgrounds and places the feedback for the film was good in general from a wide age range some of the feedback was made by people old enough to drink and some that where not so will be educating people on the subject which is the intention of the film so I think I did that well I made the documentary appeal to a younger audience using young people and asking them about there exspirances I would of used a better micorphone because I had to edit out a buzz that the microphone made to make the sound clear 

offline edit

 I exported my offline edit to a mp4 file so I could upload it to YouTube 

feedback

had 50% of revews from under 18 year olds which is the target audience 

 my feedback is showing me that my documentary reached my target audience and provided helpful information I would make there be more older people in the film to get more over 20 people watch and appeal to the documentary with mostly young people feeding back on the product