evaluation

with my feedback and looking at my film I would improve it by having more older people discus the topic and record scenes in more interesting background I thought having a consisitnet background to the interviews to make it look more professional and would make the b-roll more intresting by showing inside of pubs people drinking and the effects it has on them I would of gone into the effects over years and interview people of different backgrounds and places the feedback for the film was good in general from a wide age range some of the feedback was made by people old enough to drink and some that where not so will be educating people on the subject which is the intention of the film so I think I did that well I made the documentary appeal to a younger audience using young people and asking them about there exspirances I would of used a better micorphone because I had to edit out a buzz that the microphone made to make the sound clear